I think you did a great job with NTR. If you had just sold it without mentioning that you'd finished it I don't think anyone would have known the difference.
I have the TDOJ audio somewhere, but I haven't listened to it in a couple of years. I'll have to dig it out and listen again to see the differences from the movie.
I don't remember that you had too many cuss words in SOAWM. It's not as if it was Eddie Murphy "Raw" or something. A few cuss words are OK when they fit with the story. Makes me think of the movie Bad Santa. It's a funny movie, but Billy Bob Thornton must have said G-- d--- 30 times, and there is no reason for that. You mentioned the older people liking the comic version. I guess I am in that camp at 51, though it seems I'm one of the youngest members of the LL discussion forum. Anyway, I'm probably going to enjoy whatever you do with the stories as long as it isn't something totally bizarre like a Broadway musical. LOL Maybe an anime version of one of the stories would be popular.

Peter